Thursday, February 7, 2013

February 7

Journal - How did you choose to breakdown your 5 paragraphs of information for your essay? You need an introduction and a conclusion but what are your middle three paragraphs about? Have you found your outline helpful? Why or why not?

 I chose to breakdown my 5 paragraph by order of relevance. My introduction and conclusion are basic, with all the essential parts. My three middle paragraphs are facts, causes, and prevention of obesity. The online outline was very helpful in organizing my thoughts.

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